Last week I attended a poetry workshop with a couple of other students. We learnt about how to make a great poem and what are some of the needs to have a great poem. Here is one of the poems that I have worked on.
My lord
He is mighty, he is strong
He is powerful, he is great
He is glorious, he is victorious
And he could tear down this whole place
He sacrificed his life to save our lives.
He created a place called heaven
He has a son called jesus who is loving
He is always watching over us as we walk on earth
He is an amazing almighty person
He has showed us what love really is
He helped us through all of our rough times
He is the greatest
He is the man that is high above us
We see all his creations all around us through nature animals and us
And once our time is up on earth
Then we shall go and join him